Yesterday, we reviewed our final comps together in the class. Each group put up their 2 ads on the wall for the professor and classmates to critique our works. There were some great works, but some were not. I liked the one using superman to stand for pro while apple pie to stand for con regarding the topic of US Citizenship. It's very creative to link up superman with illegal immigrants. I did learn something new from our classmates' works.

        For our own project, although we did good at sketches, we got lots of comments on the work we just did via computer. Professor even said the feeling was different from the sketches. Some classmates said it's too flat and too dark, the professor said there were too much content on the ads. I believed generally our illustration needs more live and more emotional. Although we tried to use deep black color to express the death, it seemed not working that way. There are many things my partner and I have to fix, and lots of work to do before Wednesday presentation.